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I m Done

I m Done

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Im done with cutting

Im done with starving

Im done withbeatings

Im done with it all!!!

 

Im walking towards the doors,

the doors of reality.

Im tired

and Im done with the past

 

Im opening the window,

the window of life.

I cant take anymore pain

Im done trying to understand everything.

 

Im trying to disappear

not seeing your hand reaching to me

i need help but i dont know how to ask

 

So finally my last words

May i take your hand

and let you guide me

cause Im done trying to do it by myself

I cant and I need help

 

 

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On January 23rd 2008 frankiepinedo Said :
frankiepinedo I like this poem alot it gave me the goose bumps. and like i can totally relate because its like im tired of all this bull shit and im tired of pretending. im tired of doing things i shouldnt
On January 8th 2008 ajpineda Said :
ajpineda well i can relate. alot! but you need not do this by yourself .......so take my hand and lets walk through the iron gates of hell lets make the world as bright as the light within yourself, walk forward and dont look back cause if you look back you will trip on yourself.. just smile and laugh and let those tears dry from the warmth of your smile cause only YOU make the world brighter :) happy new years and have a good one, peace!!!!!!
On January 6th 2008 JohnLG Said :
JohnLG Nice. Lots of emotions there.
On January 5th 2008 dhmm Said :
dhmm great poem
On January 4th 2008 easybe Said :
easybe its great..with the emotional barriers around it..more of a depression of lonleiness, than happiness.
On January 4th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Love it! Very emotional.
On January 3rd 2008 justlikeme1569 Said :
justlikeme1569 I like it
On January 3rd 2008 cloud132475860 Said :
cloud132475860 this is great and i think thugnasty pretty much covered what i was gonna say plus ive already told you everything i had to say
On January 3rd 2008 native07mlj Said :
native07mlj this poem can actually relate to me...
On January 3rd 2008 lyfe08 Said :
lyfe08 this is honestly really good but the ending is a litte edgy. But this very good!
On January 3rd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 by acknowleging u need help. is the first step....help u shall reciece but it is only assistance..to show u what u are capable of and to stop u from falling any further but ultimately it is ur choice to progress further. all a friend can really do is stop u from falling back and from time to time remind you of the road u should be walking.....i like the rawness of the poem.....u spoke from the heart...i like it.
On January 3rd 2008 DemonzR4eva Said :
DemonzR4eva IM DONE!!!!