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Drowning...
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Created on 5-30-08
Can I plunge into this sea?
Without one fear in me?
I know I won't survive...
I'll just be left to die.
The water filling my lungs,
My eyesight being covered.
This feeling is something new to me.
Something undiscovered.
I'm at my last moment,
I smile at myself,
As I go down, down, down...
I have drowned.
Please Login to post comments| On August 7th 2008 samii42901 Said : | |
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yep, thats the best way to die.
its like the most painless. |
| On May 30th 2008 JewOfWonders Said : | |
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Man, that's depressing, but a swell poem. |
| On May 30th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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If you're gonna go, I imagine this is probably the best way... |
