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The Raven King |
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13
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Rock Me to Sleep |
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7
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Open the Cage |
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Why Can't I Just Be Like You? |
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What's Our Problem Now? |
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You Save Me |
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Eternal Oath |
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Fire Out of Egypt |
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Find A Way Out |
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Our Forever King |
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King of Kings |
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The Last War |
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In My Sleep |
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You'll Save Me |
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Reality |
Legacy of Man
I look at the autumn leaves,
Golden, scarlet, fire abound.
Fall from the trees,
Dead without a sound.
A thousand seasons come,
And a thousand seasons go.
Our legacies are left,
But what exactly do they show?
A world changed by hurt,
A never-healing scar.
We stand on the blood-stainded dirt,
We miss the shooting star.
Our conciences we leave behind,
Could save our souls, save our minds.
But we give in to greed,
We let it plant it's seed,
And now our demons run amuk.
In our city streets,
And in the ruck,
As Man's stone heart beats.
And our better halves fall to the ground,
As we detroy tomorrow,
And we dance to the never-ending sound
Of the angels weeping in sorrow.
A thousand seasons come,
And a thousand seasons go.
Our legacies are left behind,
But what exactly do they show?
| On November 26th 2007 Realmuckoy Said : | |
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VERY GOOD MAN...
I ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH....
SO TRUE TO... VERY TRUE...
THUMBS UP BRO. |
| On November 24th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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this is indeed a great poem...good stuff. keep it up. |
| On November 23rd 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Great work! |
| On November 23rd 2007 nick12477 Said : | |
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this is great!!!!!! i love it! and it is like the real world...but when you write poems, you might want to use MS notepad cuz when you use MS word or Mac word it auto caps the 1st word after each "enter", with notepad it does not do that but it has no spellcheck...just letting you know...:) |
| On November 17th 2007 DeathMetalPunk Said : | |
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oh sorry it's supposed to be "And now our demons run amuck" not "And now our demons run amuk" |


