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A little emo, but true all the same.Rate this Poem
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(in need of a title)
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Created on 9-29-07
A pain like a hot knife,
Gliding through the darkness,
piercing through the softness of me heart.
My feelings fall.
Like trash they are discarded,
Like small things disregarded.
All in all.
Love and hate, two sides of the same coin,
Who said they could never be together bound a joined.
(Chorus)
And i'm falling.
Down to the ground.
As I'm balling,
Without a sound.
Silence swallows me.
(2nd verse)
I put on a mask,
Concealing my hate.
And no one ever asked,
What i thought of this fate.
A heart as cold and icy as steel,
Speaks to me.
Speaks to me.
(Chorus)
A pain like a hot knife,
Gliding through the darkness,
Pierces through through the softness of my hart.
And i fall.
And i fall,
Foerver I fall.
Please Login to post comments| On January 22nd 2008 carlehmariee Said : | |
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Though I can't stand it when something is slightly dark or hateful and people call it 'emo'. It's a good song. How about something like "Freeing Myself"? |
| On January 21st 2008 fawzia11 Said : | |
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Wow! I love it! Maybe you should title it "Falling". I don't know...I'm really bad at thinking of titles! |
| On January 18th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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"The Abyss" or "Eternal Fall" Perhaps? :) |
| On September 30th 2007 Alixthetree Said : | |
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I love this. I think emo is good.
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| On September 29th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Wow, this is awesome! For a title, maybe "Silence"? (Sorry I suck at thinking of titles.) |
