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She’s lying and watching the world flash

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Created: 10/22 2009
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Category: Fear

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Ice Princess

Falling to the ground

She’s lying and watching the world flash by

Too many thoughts to express

Yet too little to live by

 

She’s writing for a purpose

That has yet to show its face

She’s facing a deadline

That had years to be changed

 

No one cares what will happen

Just another body in a blue-collar zone

Too lazy physically and too greedy mentally

To care what goes on outside of her home

 

A real relationship has been planted

But the plant will not survive for it was sown in stone

Prince Charming doesn’t understand his princess is broken

And why her only want is to be left alone

 

She’s been hurt from maturing

The world has been unkind

She’s no longer a stupid girl

But a woman who speaks her mind

 

The Prince is overbearing with questions

And is confused of what he’s doing wrong

She’s jaded, quiet, and moody

But these feelings have been inside her all along

 

She’s looking at the world from the outside

Nothing can change her past

Her future is just an outline

And tomorrow is coming fast

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On October 23rd 2009 Chuck790 Said: 
Chuck790 OMG.... i love it! totally makes sense for me right now! very touching. if its about you... i hope everything gets better... i feel your pain.
On October 22nd 2009 speederspider Said: 
speederspider I feel like you wrote this about me:) It's sooooo beautiful.
On October 21st 2009 huronpliskin Said: 
huronpliskin very personal poem. not my favorite of yours but pretty good as per usual.
On October 21st 2009 deadpoet Said: 
deadpoet oooh, you still write great poetry Dashy!