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My Poems
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Ice Princess |
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Ice Princess
Falling to the ground
She’s lying and watching the world flash by
Too many thoughts to express
Yet too little to live by
She’s writing for a purpose
That has yet to show its face
She’s facing a deadline
That had years to be changed
No one cares what will happen
Just another body in a blue-collar zone
Too lazy physically and too greedy mentally
To care what goes on outside of her home
A real relationship has been planted
But the plant will not survive for it was sown in stone
Prince Charming doesn’t understand his princess is broken
And why her only want is to be left alone
She’s been hurt from maturing
The world has been unkind
She’s no longer a stupid girl
But a woman who speaks her mind
The Prince is overbearing with questions
And is confused of what he’s doing wrong
She’s jaded, quiet, and moody
But these feelings have been inside her all along
She’s looking at the world from the outside
Nothing can change her past
Her future is just an outline
And tomorrow is coming fast
| On October 23rd 2009 Chuck790 Said: |
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| OMG.... i love it! totally makes sense for me right now! very touching. if its about you... i hope everything gets better... i feel your pain. |
| On October 22nd 2009 speederspider Said: |
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| I feel like you wrote this about me:) It's sooooo beautiful. |
| On October 21st 2009 huronpliskin Said: |
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| very personal poem. not my favorite of yours but pretty good as per usual. |
| On October 21st 2009 deadpoet Said: |
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| oooh, you still write great poetry Dashy! |


