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Mental Labyrinth
As human’s we are always alone
Alone in our minds
No one knows you exact view of the world
& You will never know mine
Morales are expensive
Thoughts are cheap
& even though it is easily refunded;
Love is free
We can fight and argue all day
Yet, honestly no one will ever win
Don’t judge me or criticize me
When you don’t know where I’ve been
How do we sum a stranger’s life story
With one glance of a t-shirt?
How do we assume intelligence level
When the hint of an accent is heard?
It’s funny how with one sentence
You can sum up my entire personality
Unless you’re God
You’ll never understand me…
Please Login to post comments| On October 30th 2009 kraziibxtch Said: |
| DUDE! i should show the people in my classroom this, i hate how they judge me. this is amazing absolutely mesmerizing, beautiful. i wuld pay money to buy this. |
| On September 3rd 2009 feebleglurg Said: |
| I like the picture = ] |
| On September 3rd 2009 feebleglurg Said: |
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| Problems: Humans doesn't need an apostrophe; it's your, not you; Morals rather than morale; and your punctuation is off in a few places. Other than that though, it's an interesting poem, and rather thought-provoking. |
| On September 3rd 2009 muse4apoem Said: |
| Whoa well stated! |
