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thoughts non rhyming sorryRate this Poem
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It's the unexplainable Love.. |
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Sad Life |
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life that i hate |
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love is in the stars |
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Forget about our love |
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notice me |
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Erased me from your heart. |
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I love her man |
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what more can i say? |
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Forget Me |
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I love him, But I love my family |
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why when you look at me
you dont see who i really am
why cant you see past the makeup
past the fake name brands
past the padded bra
underneath the preppie clothes
why cant you see me for the girl i am
the girl i want to be?
the real question it....
why are you judging me
| On January 20th 2008 fallenXx420 Said : | |
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its good... but i think this could have been a lil longer... srry just my opinion..but good! |


