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For Freedom from Fate
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Created on 6-27-08
The people divide,
Their armies collide.
Struggling to expand and increase their worth,
And to rise above what they were in birth.
Break the cycles and chains made in antiquity.
Be reunited with their dreamed tranquility.
Fighting for freedom from love and hate.
Fighting for freedom from fate.
The armies of the blue and the red.
Relentless till their enemies fall dead.
Struggling to fulfill their sole obligation.
And to rise above their fated damnation.
Break free of themselves and regain control.
Be the flawless shell not the tainted soul.
The world, with blood they will desecrate.
Dying for freedom from fate.
Their armies collide.
Struggling to expand and increase their worth,
And to rise above what they were in birth.
Break the cycles and chains made in antiquity.
Be reunited with their dreamed tranquility.
Fighting for freedom from love and hate.
Fighting for freedom from fate.
The armies of the blue and the red.
Relentless till their enemies fall dead.
Struggling to fulfill their sole obligation.
And to rise above their fated damnation.
Break free of themselves and regain control.
Be the flawless shell not the tainted soul.
The world, with blood they will desecrate.
Dying for freedom from fate.
Please Login to post comments| On July 14th 2008 Kidojidoari Said : | |
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Your words are so powerful in this. And your rhyming only intensifies the impact of every line.... Really, really good. :] |
| On July 2nd 2008 palmtrees16 Said : | |
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dangggg you have such a way with words..its amazing! this is really well done:) |
| On July 2nd 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Brilliant really!!! |
| On June 29th 2008 bambamwolf87 Said : | |
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sounds like the world itself. good job. |
| On June 28th 2008 sweetkelli16 Said : | |
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wow... i really like this one!! its really good |
| On June 28th 2008 Smarties4 Said : | |
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Awesome job! Reminds me of a series of books I just read :) Kmp on anything else new. |
| On June 27th 2008 101091 Said : | |
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Wow. Great job. I love the last line. Excellent ending. Very well written. |
| On June 27th 2008 max5892 Said : | |
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ooh wow...this is really good...i love the whole armies and battles thing..awsome job!
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