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Passion (Hate)

Views (147) Anger Created on 3-4-08 Flag

Your two-faced act will no longer work.

 

I’ve seen the real you, every flaw and quirk.

 

And with everyday you give me a new pain.

 

You use and torture me then plead “insane.”

 

I’m tired of joining in on your sick twist on fun.

 

If you hate me this much just say it and we can be done.

 

Instead of putting me last except when you need to cry.

 

And then blaming me and saying I didn’t try.

 

You’ve past worn out the ‘misunderstood’ card.

 

What do you take me for some kinda retard?

 

You lie and take advantage of me and then you pout.

 

 If this is how you treat your friends then I want out.
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On March 12th 2008 HumanF17TH Said :
HumanF17TH this is rreeaally good
On March 8th 2008 2543 Said :
2543 awesome poem!
On March 7th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 Wow I love it great job :)
On March 6th 2008 Godslildancer Said :
Godslildancer I love your writing. it's amazing! =]
On March 6th 2008 sweetkelli16 Said :
sweetkelli16 wow this is really good. i like the ending part
On March 5th 2008 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 Wow, I really love your work, that's all I can say :)
On March 5th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord Hear hear! (loud applause & cheering) you tell them! Brilliantly written!
On March 4th 2008 pjjustin Said :
pjjustin i really like this one i thought it was cool and heart felt good job man!
On March 4th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Whoa! Someone has flipped your trigger in a big way. You don't have to be a doormat to anyone. Dust your feet and move on. Awesome vent poem!
On March 4th 2008 California1516 Said :
California1516 i agree with the comment below..it flows very well..and overall its great!:)
On March 4th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Good rhythm and word choice. I especially love the line, "I’m tired of joining in on your sick twist on fun."