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The Beginning of the End
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Created on 11-26-07
No more judgment, no more pain
No more torment, not ever again
No more wars, both far and near
No more living in perpetual fear
I won't listen to their redundant lies
I won't hear their orchestrated cries
I will break long before I let my will bend
Tonight will be the beginning of the end
No more torment, not ever again
No more wars, both far and near
No more living in perpetual fear
I won't listen to their redundant lies
I won't hear their orchestrated cries
I will break long before I let my will bend
Tonight will be the beginning of the end
Please Login to post comments| On January 1st 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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well written... very nice : ) |
| On December 24th 2007 TresMechas Said : | |
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i love it!!
~*nina*~ |
| On December 21st 2007 Smarties4 Said : | |
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I love the rhyme and also the repetition (No more..., I won't...etc). It gives it a lot more emotion and meaning. Beautiful poem. |
| On December 1st 2007 sweetest303 Said : | |
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awesome! written very well with a nice flow! redundant =] i like that word |
| On December 1st 2007 sweetest303 Said : | |
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awesome! written very well with a nice flow! redundant =] i like that word |
| On December 1st 2007 sweetest303 Said : | |
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awesome! written very well with a nice flow! redundant =] i like that word |
| On November 26th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Great rhythm! I love the line, "I won't listen to their redundant lies." |
| On November 26th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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WOAH..this is good..nice rhyming!!:D |
