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Awakening

Views (69) Tragedy Created on 11-2-07 Flag

I woke into a world of rot and decay

All my close friends had run away

In seclusion I mourn for my broken heart

Left alone and in this impenetrable dark

In a land cloaked forever in the darkest night

No glimmer of hope or even the faintest light

Feeling deserted and betrayed

Raving mad and now completely insane

Nothing to lose but my life to regain

Until then I endure in this inferno of pain

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On December 21st 2007 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 I've run out of things to say (since I started reading from the bottom up) so I'll just have to start repeating... Amazingly awesome, you have a real feel for words and how to put them together!
On November 3rd 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 woah..nice work!! i like the wording of it:D
On November 2nd 2007 alienz13 Said :
alienz13 love it
On November 2nd 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic Your poems are always so emotional! Love the fifth line!