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Cold War |
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Shattered (My Mirror) |
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Into Oblivon |
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Scars |
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Greyed Out |
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The Price of Happyness |
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While the Music Box Played |
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Enigma (Without You) |
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Fortress |
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Shadows of the Past |
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Best Facade Forward |
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Addicted |
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All is Right |
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Corruption |
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Paradox |
Corruption
Emotions swirl in quicksand,
pulled under in an instant.
Veins freeze over,
filled with blood run cold.
Darkness encloses us,
the light is lost to us.
Inhumainty surronds us,
acts of hared all around.
Tempers rising, corruptions creeping in.
The taint lies just beneath the skin.
Invisable from afar,
past the smiling persona.
True selfs lie dormant,
rebellion taking hold.
All around us but
on a differnt spectrum.
Oblivous to the hypocracy
consuming our world.
Tempers rising, corruptions sinking in.
Till we are human in appearence alone.
Uncaring/unconcerned.
Will is bending, heart is breaking.
Homocide without remorse,
suicide without regret.
Compasion fails us,
our brothers betray us.
Numbness is spreading,
sympathy leaves us.
Panics spreading, corruptions creeping in.
Our biggest threat is what lies within.
We are what we fear most,
what we seek to eradicate.
We are the victim of our own hate,
no longer can we love.
Denying our own contamination
as we write our own end.
| On September 1st 2007 emerald2007 Said : | |
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It's good, yeah I don't really know how to comment on poems :D |
| On August 31st 2007 bleedingwolf Said : | |
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wow. brava agqain my friend. i love the form. your stanzas were nicely spoken. lovely!^^ |
| On August 31st 2007 sweetkelli16 Said : | |
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wow i love ur use of words |
| On August 30th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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holy crapppp..this is one of my favs! i like the last two paragraphs! |
| On August 30th 2007 nellybaby41 Said : | |
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wow thats pretty sharp. i like it. very clever. i dont like it I LOVE IT! |


