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My Poems
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Cold War |
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Shattered (My Mirror) |
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Into Oblivon |
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Scars |
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Greyed Out |
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The Price of Happyness |
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While the Music Box Played |
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Enigma (Without You) |
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Fortress |
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Shadows of the Past |
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Best Facade Forward |
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Addicted |
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All is Right |
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Corruption |
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Paradox |
While the Music Box Played
We meet in private protected by encoding
Our shared secrets hidden in the numerical chaos
How many hours did we spend together in our digital haven?
How many hours did we waste while the music box played?
We looked into the future and saw our fate
We knew nothing is ment to last
We planned to part ways but didn't think it would last forever
We exchanged our last kind words while the music box played
Taking advantage of our separation something came between us
Sympathy showed me an opportunity
Arrogance showed you an obstacle
We argued while the music box played
Our games ceased to amuse us
Our hearts yielded to reluctant hate
When we came to our senses it was to late
Now we lie separed by regrets and the music box no longer plays
| On August 21st 2007 jennaferz Said : | |
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oMg..i love it!! you have way a lot of talent, bud! =) |
| On August 15th 2007 legendarysim Said : | |
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I like how this poem has an eerie feeling to it. This has a lot of quality in it too. |
| On August 14th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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love the title of it! woah..my fav line is the last one!! once again its really well written..it seems like ur very good with words...and all ur poems are creative..and they make me think! |


