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Into Oblivon

Views (77) Tragedy Created on 8-12-07 Flag

Once upon a time we had our way
They watched and we held the reins
But our day came to an end
Seems your time came too soon
And when you fell I felt it too
That feeling as you were torn away
Into Oblivion

With out you I can't go
My inspiration caught in the undertow
Now you image is flickering
Like last nights dream
I wish I could go back to sleep
But the memory is fading
Into Oblivion

Where you went I do not know
Acsesion or descension I do not care
Because neither would bring you to me
I hold on to sanity's brink
But with out you to pull me up
In time I will surely fall

Into Oblivion to be with you

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On October 6th 2007 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 *awed into silence*
On August 13th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 wow..im surprised no one has voted for this or commented yet..i really like it..my fav line is "now your image is flickering" idk why..but i like it :)