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same style as last one but not as good.Rate this Poem
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Shattered (My Mirror)
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Created on 8-12-07
Twisting/turning,
bent by hate.
Light waves going
every which way.
My Mirror shattered
into a million pieces.
And you reflected
in every shard.
Parasitic/hive-like mind.
Personailty dragged down
beneath the waves.
Individuality lost, gone
down the drain.
My life shattered
into a million pieces
And you reflected
in everyone
And in every eye
I see your face
smirking/staring back at me.
Your visage frozen
trapped in my mirror.
A sickness I can't get
out of my system.
My hope shattered
into a million pieces.
And despair reflected
in everything.
Like the old joke
your uglyness
has shattered my mirror.
Its destroyed my hope.
Its taken over my life,
and made it yours.
Please Login to post comments| On August 20th 2007 sweetkelli16 Said : | |
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wow this is really really good! |
| On August 13th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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woah this is excellent writing i love it alot :) my fav lil section was the second paragraph |
| On August 12th 2007 blindfaeth Said : | |
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LOOOOOVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE IT :D |
