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13
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Cold War |
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8
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Shattered (My Mirror) |
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6
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Into Oblivon |
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8
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Scars |
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6
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Greyed Out |
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5
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The Price of Happyness |
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14
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While the Music Box Played |
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12
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Enigma (Without You) |
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7
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Fortress |
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9
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Shadows of the Past |
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11
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Best Facade Forward |
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Addicted |
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All is Right |
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12
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Corruption |
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Paradox |
Cold War
knowledge like a plauge
contagoues/spreading
mouth to mouth
numbing the scholars
twisting the learned
now my knowledge
has corrupted you
taint seeped in
slowly/deadly like decay
its eroding our friendship
I watched with
blind eyes/idle hands
as you unraveled our world
overtime a void
of unspoken words
of unexpressed feelings
grew between us
on opposing sides
locked in cold war
cooperation is the key
trapped in stalemate
friendship will release
at first I tried
to delay this battle
I forced myself
into a mold
became what you
wanted me to be
but
you wouldnt
allow a compromise
no substitute for
your so called "purity"
in your greed
you denied my need
my life was ripped in two
now I ask
for an alliance
against the true enemy
your unasked question
your hidden desire
do you fear my anwser?
if it is me you want gone
speak your painful wish
I will endure that knowledge
to bring you peace
special thanks to:
john m
cole s
kevin w
| On August 28th 2007 FloydTheTurtle Said : | |
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great! |
| On August 22nd 2007 101091 Said : | |
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wow. I love it. It's really good. |
| On August 16th 2007 legendarysim Said : | |
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Good work :) |
| On August 14th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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woah :O this is so good..and very well written..i love all the details and ur word choices! |
| On August 11th 2007 MissQueene13 Said : | |
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beautiful, needs work on some of the spelling. for some reason it wont let me rate up >. |
| On August 11th 2007 blindfaeth Said : | |
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lol i didnt do anything why is my name on that list =/ |


