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Falling
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Created on 2-21-08
Together you and i
Stronger than any washed up wave
More powerful than any tornado
That comes through these lands
Like a mountain
Steep, rocky terrain
Life could be over with one wrong step
But we still soared from the height
Like a sandy beach
Warmth spreading through
So soft and straight
Guiding you on
Lately though the mountains rise
To steep
No hold
Im falling through
Is this the end
Is there nothing to hold on too
No path to follow
With one last breath i whisper
Goodbye
Stronger than any washed up wave
More powerful than any tornado
That comes through these lands
Like a mountain
Steep, rocky terrain
Life could be over with one wrong step
But we still soared from the height
Like a sandy beach
Warmth spreading through
So soft and straight
Guiding you on
Lately though the mountains rise
To steep
No hold
Im falling through
Is this the end
Is there nothing to hold on too
No path to follow
With one last breath i whisper
Goodbye
Please Login to post comments| On March 4th 2008 jetkills Said : | |
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wow your good awesome ^^ |
| On February 21st 2008 amandagraceb Said : | |
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AMAZING!!!! this is by far on my top list of poetry. |
| On February 21st 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Now you're just showing off. lol. This is superb! |
