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In Loving Memory

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Early in the morning
Before we all awake,

Patricia Priesner
Was already away.

She went to work
To test motorcycles,

But hadnt come back
For her life had been taken.

A dear mother she was
And a wonderful friend,

Tore us apart
When the van hit.

We all cried a lot
Her few kids and I,

We'll always remember the day
Patricia Priesner died.

I know it seems odd
For we had just got back from camping,

But maybe it just
Had to happen.

I dont understand
that terriable morning,

But her daughters last words
Were beautiful and warming.
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On August 2nd 2007 DorkyBoo08 Said :
DorkyBoo08 this is really deep good. Yeah, it is so sad. I'm sorry for losing her.
On August 2nd 2007 DorkyBoo08 Said :
DorkyBoo08 this is really deep good. Yeah, it is so sad. I'm sorry for losing her.
On June 26th 2007 Raiyoku Said :
Raiyoku Wow, deep... has this really happaned?
On February 22nd 2007 twichims Said :
twichims this is good i really like it- very sad though