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~~The First Dance~~

Views (176) Passion Created on 4-20-07 Flag

"May I have this first dance?"
To thee I shall call.
As you grace me with a generous glance.
At this momentous Ball.
Smiling into my eyes and me into yours with a smile of mine.
"You may have this first dance."
You say as I look at you, hands beginning to intertwine.
To let you know I will cherish this chance.
Our very first dance.

Our very first dance.
I hope will perpetually last and there after.
Just as our love will endure all time and decay.
A child of yours, someday I'd like to father.
I'll stand steadfast by your side everyday.
Just as we stand here now hand ind hand.
At our very first dance.

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On April 21st 2007 isdrowning Said :
isdrowning aw. this one's a little short. two stanzas, but you said enough. very descriptive about the meeting. once again, good job.
On April 20th 2007 Dalveen Said :
Dalveen Plz comment. XD