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~~My Pain, My Suffering, My Torment~~
This pain, this suffering, this tormenting love.
This love that breaks my aching heart.
Why oh why does love hurt so much?
In despairation I scream to the world.
She stole my heart with the first glance.
Now it feels like she has places it on an anvil,
Pounding it to pieces with her hammer.
Is this what love is supposed to feel like?
This pain, this suffering, this tormenting love.
If I had known that love would hurt this much,
I would not have asked for an angel,
Would not have asked for one as beautiful as she.
This pain, this suffering, this tormenting love.
I have become this twisted, tortured thing in her love.
Unable to breath, unable to break free.
Unable to do anything in her torturous grasp.
This searing pain inside of me,
Is more than I can bare.
The torture she puts me through,
When she says she loves me then pushes me away.
This pain, this suffering, this tormenting love.
For me to take with me eternally,
As I sink into purgatory.
| On April 22nd 2007 dark013angel Said : | |
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i love it...i can relate very well right now |
| On April 20th 2007 isdrowning Said : | |
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ahhh the teenage hormones, they almost burn. your little poem reminds me a little bit of romeo. you use a slightly better vocabulary than most. i'm pleased. |
| On April 20th 2007 tosad2care Said : | |
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This poem is really great! Its sad but i have felt the exact same way about my ex-boyfriend |
| On April 20th 2007 blutess Said : | |
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love the way u wrote it. its very deep, almost sad but hey, thats love. |


