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Love's Hidden Lies
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Created on 8-27-07
I trusted you with my life
But in the end you lied
I trusted with my heart
And now it has died
The day that you lied
Is the day I lost my way
The day that you lied
Is the day I lost my mind
I loved you from the start
But only in the end did I find it was a lie
I thought you had placed me within your heart
Now that I know I wasn't, I wish I could just die
Every day you lied to my face
Every day when you said "I love you"
I wonder why I ever loved you in the first place
Now I know that all you said wasn't true
Please Login to post comments| On December 15th 2007 TheStupiedidot Said : | |
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thats so sad. Your a great writer and i love the wording in this poem. I can relate to this ... in a way Keep writing =) |
| On September 2nd 2007 isdrowning Said : | |
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such a global message of heartbreak. i think if you took out a couple of the smaller words, it'd flow a bit nicer, but overall, great. |
| On August 27th 2007 blutess Said : | |
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im sure lots of poeple know the meaning behind the words and can probaly relate. very good. is kinda sad. |
| On August 27th 2007 lbealy Said : | |
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Awwww this is really sad. Same thing has happened to me. It hurts like hell to be hurt. |
