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Lost Without Love

Views (60) Love Created on 8-21-07 Flag

Rampaging through my heart,
Thoughts of uncontrollable nature.
Emotions and feelings from within the dark,
All of which consume my stature.

I feel the hate rise up in me,
In the dead of night I leave.
I wonder out where you can't see,
Inside my shell I wait and bleed.

Slowly as I wait dying,
Only now do I see.
While I lay here, to myself I'm lying.
Darkness is all thats left in me.

Silently I wipe away a tear,
As I place my hands upon my head.
With no-one around to hear,
Since inside I'm already dead.

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On December 15th 2007 TheStupiedidot Said :
TheStupiedidot Excellent poem its very unique and a certain touch to it ... you have a true talent keep writeing I cant wait to read the next one =)
On September 2nd 2007 isdrowning Said :
isdrowning great. the rhyme scheme was alright, but the message is just so powerful. i think i have one more left. oooh i'm so excited
On August 27th 2007 blutess Said :
blutess very good