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~~My Pain, My Suffering, My Torment~~ |
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~~The Rose Within~~ |
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~~My Pain and Tears~~ |
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~~True Loves First Kiss~~ |
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~~Darkness~~ |
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~~The First Dance~~ |
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~~My Dearest Jess~~ |
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~~Whisperings of Death~~ |
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Love's Pain |
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Sweetness Of Rage |
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Lost Without Love |
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Love's Hidden Lies |
Love's Pain
Standing within this darkness,
Enshrouded in my emotions.
Wondering how so many people can be so heartless,
Confused with all of loves commotions.
I try to understand love,
Knowing that it is just like a rose.
Realising it isn't always as pure as a dove,
But will eventually die as does a rose.
Never before have I felt such pain,
Never before have I felt so lost.
Once again my heart has been slain,
Now I know what love does cost.
Tormented by these dreams.
By these haunting nightmares,
Where nothing is what it seems.
In love and nobody cares.
| On September 2nd 2007 isdrowning Said : | |
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i know it's more of a painful poem, but reading your work just brings a smile to my face. so far, not bad. i like your similes in the second stanza. let's see what else is in store.. |


