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Like the Ice...
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Created on 1-8-08
Like the Ice,
I am fragile,
I will break,
If you strike me,
I will melt,
If you heat me,
If you wish to tread upon my surface,
Hope I do not break,
Like the Ice,
I am strong,
I will never die,
I might go away,
But the cold brings me back,
And no matter how hard you try,
I shall always return,
To water,
Like the Ice,
I am transparent,
Not as glass,
But enough to see,
What lies within,
What remains,
Trapped inside,
No matter how hard I try to hide.
Please Login to post comments| On February 18th 2008 oz10norrid Said : | |
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nice...i like the similes and parallelism of it all it flows quite well, even without rhyme |
| On January 16th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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"...But the cold brings me back..." I love it! |
| On January 10th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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This is captivating, I am also reading in order |
| On January 9th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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love it, love the hole consept of the elementals. reading it in order,(not the order you posted it in) |
| On January 8th 2008 pinkheffalump Said : | |
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wow like a riddle for yourself...goodjob. |
| On January 8th 2008 Daemion Said : | |
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i am, like the ice, difficult... |
