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Created on 12-13-07
if into life we dredge our feet without regard of omen,
many things once to know our hearts shall sure forget,
and if one feels the sand and stone between their toes' embrace, then who may'est tell why life calls once darkened souls to light, how is it that those angry few can many times find content, for when the aspire to liven said setting with little more than bitter word battle, and if one cannot hold their ire they do not sit and muddle, whenst their anguish cannot they express they follow trend to noose, so why is it they are first to find offer of forgiveness and reformation, when bitter old man is found hanging from the threads of his life's work, next thing he knows reside in youth once again for where another life bestow.
many things once to know our hearts shall sure forget,
and if one feels the sand and stone between their toes' embrace, then who may'est tell why life calls once darkened souls to light, how is it that those angry few can many times find content, for when the aspire to liven said setting with little more than bitter word battle, and if one cannot hold their ire they do not sit and muddle, whenst their anguish cannot they express they follow trend to noose, so why is it they are first to find offer of forgiveness and reformation, when bitter old man is found hanging from the threads of his life's work, next thing he knows reside in youth once again for where another life bestow.
Please Login to post comments| On February 18th 2008 oz10norrid Said : | |
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wow, nice prose poem, i love the language you use, ...methinks it somewhat victorian, and nice idea, i do love the irony of it all, but whats worse is if your hindu and believe in the whole "caste system" then of course in punishment for committing suicide not only would you be reincarnated but you would be reincarnated into a lower caste, a lower class, and into a harder situation, which of course if you couldnt handle the original situation, you cant hanle a worse one, and thus it is an endless cycle that account for all the stupid bone heads in the world! |
| On December 19th 2007 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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I like the way you write. Very well said. |
| On December 18th 2007 Daemion Said : | |
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this is a VERY old poem about the reincarnative factor of suicide... the idea that i've heard ad believe is that when someone commits suicide, they are reborn immediatly... like a metaphysical "slap in the face" because they try to escape life and they have to go RIGHT back in... i like the irony that's all |
