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JUST SOMETHING I WROTE THAT NEEDS AN ENDRate this Poem
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MY TORN SOUL... |
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MY TRUE LOVE |
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LOVE ME, FOR ME... |
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LOVE ME TODAY... |
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RIVER OF TEARS... |
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THREW THE EYES OF AN OLD MAN... |
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TRAPPED |
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A RAY OF LIGHT |
A RAY OF LIGHT
YOU HAVE JUST COME INTO MY LIFE,
NOT TO LONG AFTER MY WORLD ,
HAS BEEN TORN APART.
YOU MAKE ME FEEL GOOD ABOUT MYSELF.
AND THAT IS SOMETHING
THAT HAS BEEN MISSING FOR YEARS.
YOU HAVE GIVEN ME A RAY OF LIGHT.
TO CHASE OUT THE DARKNESS,
I HAVE BEEN LIVING IN
FOR WAY TOO LONG.
YOU ARE GIVING ME BACK TO MYSELF.
FOR THAT ALONE,
I WOULD GIVE YOU ALMOST ANYTHING.
BUT ABOVE ALL THAT.
YOU HAVE GIVEN ME YOUR FRIENDSHIP.
AND THAT IS WHAT REALLY,
HITS HOME WITH ME.
CAUSE I CAN SEE, THERE R OTHER THINGS,
U WOULD RATHER ASK OF ME.
I FEEL GOD, HAS SENT YOU TO ME,
MAYBE YOUR AN ANGEL IN DESCISE.
OR MAYBE YOUR THE DEVIL,
SENT TO TEMPT ME & TELL ME LIES.
EITHER WAY,
I'M ALONG FOR THE RIDE.
DAMN YA'LL, I HAD WRITER'S BLOCK. I CAN NOT FINISH. I WILL SOON. BUT FEEL FREE TO COMMENT ON WHAT I HAVE WROTE & MAYBE GIVE ME A POINTER OR 2.
| On May 28th 2007 dureall Said : | |
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Not much of a writer myself although I do write from time to time. I like it where it stands as of now. |
| On May 23rd 2007 MikieScene1 Said : | |
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thats pretty rock'n=) |
| On May 23rd 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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It's pretty good so far, let me know when you finish it. |
| On May 22nd 2007 13579Vee Said : | |
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I like it ending there makes the reader finish it off in there own mind |


