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JUST SOMETHING I WROTE THAT NEEDS AN END

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A RAY OF LIGHT

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YOU HAVE JUST COME INTO MY LIFE,

NOT TO LONG AFTER MY WORLD ,

HAS BEEN TORN APART.

YOU MAKE ME FEEL GOOD ABOUT MYSELF.

AND THAT IS SOMETHING

THAT HAS BEEN MISSING FOR YEARS.

YOU HAVE GIVEN ME A RAY OF LIGHT.

TO CHASE OUT THE DARKNESS,

I HAVE BEEN LIVING IN

FOR WAY TOO LONG.

YOU ARE GIVING ME BACK TO MYSELF.

FOR THAT ALONE,

I WOULD GIVE YOU ALMOST ANYTHING.

BUT ABOVE ALL THAT.

YOU HAVE GIVEN ME YOUR FRIENDSHIP.

AND THAT IS WHAT REALLY,

HITS HOME WITH ME.

CAUSE I CAN SEE, THERE R OTHER THINGS,

U WOULD RATHER ASK OF ME.

I FEEL GOD, HAS SENT YOU TO ME,

MAYBE YOUR AN ANGEL IN DESCISE.

OR MAYBE YOUR THE DEVIL,

SENT TO TEMPT ME & TELL ME LIES.

EITHER WAY,

I'M ALONG FOR THE RIDE.

DAMN YA'LL, I HAD WRITER'S BLOCK. I CAN NOT FINISH. I WILL SOON. BUT FEEL FREE TO COMMENT ON WHAT I HAVE WROTE & MAYBE GIVE ME A POINTER OR 2.

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On May 28th 2007 dureall Said :
dureall Not much of a writer myself although I do write from time to time. I like it where it stands as of now.
On May 23rd 2007 MikieScene1 Said :
MikieScene1 thats pretty rock'n=)
On May 23rd 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg It's pretty good so far, let me know when you finish it.
On May 22nd 2007 13579Vee Said :
13579Vee I like it ending there makes the reader finish it off in there own mind