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Created:
01/16 2008
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169
Category:
Tragedy
My Poems
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thinking of you |
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13
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you're not here |
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you two |
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soldiers |
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Let it be |
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Dancer |
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Not Noticed |
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I love you |
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Another Chance |
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You |
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Divorce |
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When you're gone |
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Growing up |
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Get over you |
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My Daddy!! |
Not Noticed
Out in the cold
I lie here and die
Every car that passes by doesn't care
I sit here and cry
No one even sees me
While they drive in their warm cars
I have nothing to do at all
But stare at the stars
I wish that I'll be warm and inside a house
Eating good food, just like everybody else
I crumble in a ball
And give myself warmth
It's a little hard to do
When its raining a storm
I am sooo little and can't hold on
Every little breath might be my last
I daze in my palms
and remember the past
I pass away
With nothing but cold
When the people finally notice me
My story will be told
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| On January 18th 2008 XxXkillinMeXxX Said: |
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| I agree w/ everyone below me! |
| On January 18th 2008 kittybabe21 Said: |
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| awesomeee |
| On January 17th 2008 makana96792 Said: |
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| very good |
| On January 16th 2008 joabizz Said: |
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| wow,,, what a great read,, that was beautiful... |
| On January 16th 2008 dancerbabe16 Said: |
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| very good =] |
| On January 16th 2008 amptone Said: |
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| well done |


