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Created: 01/16 2008
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Category: Tragedy

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Not Noticed

Out in the cold

I lie here and die

Every car that passes by doesn't care

I sit here and cry

No one even sees me

While they drive in their warm cars

I have nothing to do at all

But stare at the stars

I wish that I'll be warm and inside a house

Eating good food, just like everybody else

I crumble in a ball

And give myself warmth

It's a little hard to do

When its raining a storm

I am sooo little and can't hold on

Every little breath might be my last

I daze in my palms

and remember the past

I pass away

With nothing but cold

When the people finally notice me

My story will be told

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On August 21st 2008 N4cerNik Said: 
N4cerNik Very good job!
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On January 18th 2008 XxXkillinMeXxX Said: 
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makana96792 very good
On January 16th 2008 joabizz Said: 
joabizz wow,,, what a great read,, that was beautiful...
On January 16th 2008 dancerbabe16 Said: 
dancerbabe16 very good =]
On January 16th 2008 amptone Said: 
amptone well done