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ever been nervous???Rate this Poem
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Created:
01/10 2008
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311
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Other
My Poems
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you're not here |
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you two |
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soldiers |
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Let it be |
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Dancer |
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Not Noticed |
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I love you |
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Another Chance |
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You |
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Divorce |
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When you're gone |
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Growing up |
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Get over you |
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My Daddy!! |
Dancer
My adrenaline is pumping
I can barely breathe
I'm dripping sweat everywhere
I'm wobbling my knees
I look out into the open crowd
And can't believe how many people there are
People are staring and cheering at me
They make me feel like a star
The music plays and I begin to dance
Moving my feet this way and that
When it's all over,all said and done
Suprisingly, I'm very sad, because I was having so much fun
| On July 22nd 2008 Angel2k11 Said: |
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| this is totally absolutely cool!!! ILOVEIT!!! amazing....you are an awesome poet!! |
| On February 16th 2008 urjealousofme Said: |
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| awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On January 24th 2008 hollistechik08 Said: |
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| diz ones koo nigga |
| On January 16th 2008 kittybabe21 Said: |
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| loooove it!! |
| On January 11th 2008 dancerbabe16 Said: |
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| loved it! =] =] =] |
| On January 11th 2008 blah2blah Said: |
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| its so amazing how you write about something you love to do. and yes, great flow! |
| On January 10th 2008 XxXkillinMeXxX Said: |
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| loveLy! |
| On January 10th 2008 chipmunkgirl10 Said: |
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| very good! you have perfect flow... will you please check out my latest poem "disfigured reflection" please |
| On January 10th 2008 bittyb1 Said: |
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| really good! It had a nice flow! |
| On January 10th 2008 joabizz Said: |
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| I like this,, very good.. |
| On January 10th 2008 makana96792 Said: |
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| it's very good. |
| On January 10th 2008 amptone Said: |
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| Amazing flow girl! |


