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My first poem, please leave comments!!!Rate this Poem
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First Break-Up
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Created on 5-31-07
I’m really hurtAnd I just can’t runThe pain follows me,And in my heart Makes a home. He stays in my mindI see him all the timeMy feelings are a burden That I can’t get off my shoulders. He’s always smiling,He’s okay with itAnd I can’t help itI just look at him. That cute smileIs always there,Those bright eyesAlways shining;Showing his happiness insideThat’s eating me alive.
Please Login to post comments| On May 31st 2007 Akinka Said : | |
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Cool poem!!! |
| On May 31st 2007 jarnotti Said : | |
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thats really good i know where your coming from good job |
| On May 31st 2007 CrazyGirlz25 Said : | |
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ok.... mistake... every cap letter means a new verse |
