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Taken
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Created on 8-24-06
Poetic Romance 7: Taken
Current mood: 
depressed
Category: Writing and Poetry
Taken
I see that your with another man,
And I know that you care for eachother-
I know that he treats you right.
I'm happy for you...
But to be honest- I'm crying inside.
I'm crying because I miss the time
That you and I spent with eachother.
The memories we've shared are drifting,
As the emotional void left behind
Is filled with new experience
For you and I, without eachother,
I say that I wont stand for it-
But there's nothing that I can do about it.
We seem to have parted ways, my love-
The feelings we've felt for eachother are gone,
Taken away by another-
My hopes, my dreams... crushed in entirety.
I can't even be your friend at this moment,
Because he's taken you away from me-
Out of jealousy, and pride.
But if, and when, he breaks your heart,
I'll still be waiting, because I love you.
-CJ
Please Login to post comments| On June 8th 2008 Naturegr1 Said : | |
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Aww thats cute if i was this girl id totally date you if you gave this to her.
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| On June 1st 2008 sexyrebel94 Said : | |
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wow.....you really do love her.. huh? wanting her to be happy even if its not wit you |
| On April 2nd 2008 Papi1348 Said : | |
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i no how u feel homie |
| On December 30th 2007 WiCCanCreaTure Said : | |
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wow this is good. id never expect a dude too write such a loving poem. :( makes me sad. |
| On November 11th 2007 mslayz Said : | |
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wow dats breath taking i love it... |
| On July 29th 2007 marcahjenna Said : | |
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that was so beautiful....i would never exspect a boy to wright somthing like that |
| On July 16th 2007 KInKychIk Said : | |
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mm love iT......iTs ReaLly nIce N in realitY she FeeLS the same way... |
| On June 16th 2007 vianca1 Said : | |
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BEAUTIFUL I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On June 10th 2007 sweety959 Said : | |
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this poem is so beautiful.. i think i have some thing in my eyes. lol!!! |
| On May 8th 2007 katherine07233 Said : | |
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aww..thats sweet |
| On April 1st 2007 aazil888 Said : | |
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sweet
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| On January 31st 2007 daisykat2291 Said : | |
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cute
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| On January 27th 2007 kyangel209 Said : | |
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this is so sweet!!..THIS IS WONDERFUL! |
| On January 15th 2007 bandolera8 Said : | |
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aww i like...so sweet |
| On December 9th 2006 timmiedee Said : | |
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very nice |
| On November 20th 2006 ruskiya Said : | |
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BEAUTIFUL! |
| On August 25th 2006 Golfisfun Said : | |
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Your Poems Are So Beautiful |
