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Her Revenge

Views (301) Anger Created on 12-12-07 Flag

  

The darkness creeps in with silent feet

To once again consume me whole

This life long enemy that won’t retreat

The wages of this war that tax my soul

 

The green eyes that you once left black

Resentment flashes through their depths

Blurred by tears they can’t hold back

Cursed by the images they can’t forget

 

The trap that waits to catch me slip

Chases incessantly about my heels

Frantic to escape its oppressive grip

That deprives my heart of all it feels

 

Yet in this game of cat and mouse devise

Transcendence has gradually begun to transpire

A warrior has formed through a will to survive

And an escalating rage now fuels the fire

 

An unnoticed alteration of predator from prey

No longer the girl you once affronted

Your life will be the price that you pay

As the hunter now becomes the hunted

 

In what once I feared now find strength

In the shadowed past from which I used to hide

A vengeance lurks that knows no length

Now in me all that you’ll ever find is a fate poetically justified

 

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On February 22nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth This was wonderful!!!

I'm impressed!

On February 17th 2008 xxxAngelicaxxx Said :
xxxAngelicaxxx very deep i love it
On December 23rd 2007 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 You have a wonderful way with your words... Loved it
On December 14th 2007 gigglehottie Said :
gigglehottie you have a very talented skill nice poetry
On December 13th 2007 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 oo great job! you're an amazing writer
On December 13th 2007 Wyldemiller Said :
Wyldemiller You often read things that describe an emotion or an event that takes you out of this world and places you in the hands of moment. In this work you have written I see the courage and fortitude of a woman, better yet a human being, that has came fell into hell, fought their way back through, and even now the devil himself dare not put his word in front of their's. Outstanding and nonetheless flawless execution of getting a deep dark hurt out. I am very impressed. *Hugs*
On December 12th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 well we've talked already so u know my thougts but i am gonna add this.....I Super Ghetto Man, The Defender Of Ladies' Honor, shall protect u but please patient. I am Ghetto Man and u know us ghetto folk cant get anywhere on time. lol
On December 12th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic Intense, great word choice!
On December 12th 2007 dark013angel Said :
dark013angel amazing...fits me in a way...*shrugs* beautifully written..you have a great talent going for ya..don't waste it
On December 12th 2007 Emylinda Said :
Emylinda Wow, you have a way with words! Love it!
On December 12th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Oooo very dark and emotive. Love it! You have a great talent.