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Reality Sleeps Our Dream

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Distance fades into the horizon of this dream we share

Reality falls away as time surrenders its dominion

Falling together oblivious to any other thought or care

Lost within the folds of the world which we envision

 

Our urgency pours vividly into the plot we devise

This need to be understood that is somehow fulfilled

Bound by our weaknesses yet liberated through our ties

Strengthening the structure of the prototype we build

 

A place of perfection where reality is synthetic

Our sanctuary of respite sheltering us from the actual

Where all of wild and whispering unite soulfully poetic

Here where these feelings are all that is natural

 

Holding fast to these moments that keep us as one

Before the hands of time regain their force

Defying the certain approach of an envious sun

Never letting it dissuade us from our fated course

 

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On February 22nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Wow!
When you said you were "working" on some poems in chat, I thought to myself, gosh mine seem to just fall out without much work. After reading only a few of yours, I understand the effort that you must put into them.

You're a wonderful poet! I like your style!!!

On February 17th 2008 xxxAngelicaxxx Said :
xxxAngelicaxxx very nice.. i loved the line "A place of perfection where reality is synthetic". very nice
On December 12th 2007 Emylinda Said :
Emylinda Fabulous.
On December 6th 2007 MrKeesee Said :
MrKeesee Really heartfelt, I love it!
On December 6th 2007 nightangelgale Said :
nightangelgale great stuff
On December 6th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Absolutely lovely Chula. Nice job.
On December 6th 2007 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 love this =]
On December 6th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 symbiosis must be essential to have a strong relationship.
On December 5th 2007 Wyldemiller Said :
Wyldemiller Two souls whose hearts in sync like the ticking of a clock... .this is beautiful work once agian I am impressed Chula very very very nice work :)