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Romeo's Solace |
Your Secret
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Created on 11-18-07
I want to be the secret that lives
Only inside of you, the one that gives
You the peace that other could ever do
The one that you know can see you
For all the amazing that you are
The closest thing to you even if that you’re far
Away from the physical feel of my touch
So extremely excessive and yet never quite enough
I want to be the secret you keep all to your self
That leads you to the places of things you never felt
That comprehends your thoughts that no other understands
Lifting you back up when you don’t know where you stand
The bright spot that can lighten the darkest of your days
Lending you the words when you’ve forgotten what to say
An escape where you can go to when nothing else is right
Always there to dream with when sleep eludes your night
I want to be your secret always safely kept
Bearing all your burdens any other would not accept
The answer to every question you didn’t dare to ask
That lets you cry the tears you felt you must hold back
That patiently awaits you when you need some time to away
That’s always truly faithful and would never go astray
The reason that I tell you, these things I want to be
Is to share with you my secret … they’re what you are to me
Please Login to post comments| On February 22nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I like this one too. I'm not sure if it was intended but I like the shape of this as well. Like a body with big feet at the bottom. :) |
| On November 23rd 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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the only "crap" about this poem is that i didnt read it sooner. |
| On November 19th 2007 sabrina225 Said : | |
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its a great poem...but your missing words and not useing the right tense of words....its good so dont get me wrong...but like some parts for example in the first stanza: You the peace that other could ever do The one that you know can see you
I would have put You the peace that others could never do The one that you know can see you... for that verse it would have made more sense.... i love it so dont get me wrong its really good
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| On November 18th 2007 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
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dancinjames are you outside your mind this is one of the better ones i have even read on here u need to learn about taste |
| On November 18th 2007 dancinjames Said : | |
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crap |
| On November 18th 2007 Wyldemiller Said : | |
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You know the feeling you have .... when you wait all evening in anticipation.... and finally you live what you have been dreaming.... that gives me the in between rush lol very smooth :) |
| On November 18th 2007 MontageLiving Said : | |
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its a good poem..its hard to write them..but i really like it... check out some of mine? |
| On November 18th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Soooo good missus. Can totally relate to every syllable. The heart is a tricky fellow isn't it. ;) |
| On November 18th 2007 goodgurl8504 Said : | |
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I know those wants... Is that really so much to ask? I love it! It's amazing, (as usual! ;) ) And yes, I just get it all to well! |
