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Do I Accept?

Views (120) Love Created on 10-9-07 Flag
 I have no explanation for why my soul seeks your presence

I know more than to fall down these paths you lay before me

Yet something in your soul still reaches me

Touches me, and I concede without comprehension

Yes I know more than this but …

It’s my soul that chooses not to listen

 

This passage is not foreign

I know exactly where it leads

But your voice it holds a new persuasion

Promises of deliverance from these walls

That I have built around my existence

Liberation from these cursed traditions

 

Your presence breathing life

To the fires of my rebellions

Speaking to the forgotten places of my heart

Demanding recognition of intimate passions

Pushed away and concealed

Leaving me provoked by the invitation you suggest

Of all that we could share … do I accept?

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On March 25th 2008 BetoGalvez Said :
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nice
On November 24th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 oh damn....i do see the similarities...no this is my first time reading this....wow...it's like ur in my head or something....wow.....i this is me...that cursed woman still has a death grip on my heart. and she is the only one i get "weak" around it's a kind of rapture that cannot be explained only experienced for one's self. it's hard sometimes. to want the heavens but knowing it's only pain ahead. but those rare moments of happiness almost feel worth the hell. u know?
On November 3rd 2007 Wyldemiller Said :
Wyldemiller That sounds very very sensual. Nice job :)
On October 20th 2007 goodgurl8504 Said :
goodgurl8504 So I have yet to find a poem of yours I don't adore! haha! Great job!