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Sort of a epilouge to Not Like I Used ToRate this Poem
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Trapped
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Created on 10-9-07
I'm trapped by three words issued from his mouth.
It is not "I love you", but something more sincere.
Something dreadful, something awful, something I did not want to hear.
I did not expect it, he hid it so well.
But I was foolish, and I guessed it.
Now I know his inner hell.
The reasons for his actions become clear.
He won't hurt me, even in a pleasureable way.
Even though I request it, with my seductive leer.
How could this happen? I never would have guessed.
Now I'm his angel, the one who saved him.
I'm the reason he feels so blessed.
It was a mistake, I didn't mean to be his saviour.
His words of love and adoration cause me pain.
And it shows in my behaviour.
Now I have an inner hell, something so sincere.
Something awful, something horrible,
My path is now unclear.
Please Login to post comments| On October 11th 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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wow your wording with this is fantastic, I really love it more that I care to describe in a little comment box.. So I will leave you with this --Please continue to inspire. |
| On October 10th 2007 poet77 Said : | |
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love it |
| On October 9th 2007 stics917 Said : | |
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hmmm unique,i like :] |
| On October 9th 2007 charissa14 Said : | |
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i guess its pretty good |
| On October 9th 2007 mypoeticrage Said : | |
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Very good |
| On October 9th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Beautiful... |
