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Wishes
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Created on 4-19-07
~Wishes~
You'll never know what's in my head,
it's something that i've never said.
It's not anything you'd expect it to be.
It's something that really depresses me.
Just to think about it brings chills to my spine.
It's wishing I hoping that you could be mine.
Now that you know just how I feel,
what's on your mind? How I wish this wasn't real.
I wish I never told you that I love you with all my heart.
I just wish I hadn't told you, because now we're far apart.
Please Login to post comments| On June 12th 2007 babygurlj6 Said : | |
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very good!!!luv it |
| On May 21st 2007 Jamiemd Said : | |
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"Don't cry, dry your eye" |
| On April 21st 2007 hurleygirl12 Said : | |
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that is so freaken good i loved it |
| On April 19th 2007 mrspina Said : | |
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awwww!!! i like it! its so sweet! yet sad :( but its cool! |
| On April 19th 2007 jmh1011 Said : | |
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i so so so so so so luv it!!!!!! |
| On April 19th 2007 rainythoughts Said : | |
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nice! |
| On April 19th 2007 coollizzie168 Said : | |
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i like!!!! hehe |
| On April 19th 2007 medestigo Said : | |
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Why did you increased the length of the lines, when it came to the point? It seems that this poem is split into 2 parts: the first one about "hidden and private" feelings, the second about a "supermarket of emotions". I think that you made long time ago: now it's time to manage it and choose to keep on rhyming with Dr. Jeckill or with Mr. Hide. |
