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Broken Bottle |
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Love Wasted |
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Missing Him |
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So Far |
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To Get Through It |
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Mother |
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Life |
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Wishes |
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Home |
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You |
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I don't need you |
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Suicidal Love |
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Not Anymore |
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Consumining Love |
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My Decision |
Love Wasted
How can I show you how I feel,
when you don't seem to think it's real.
I try to kiss you, and you turn away.
I say "I love you", but you don't return the phrase.
I try so hard to prove my love to you,
but I just can't seem to get it through.
Am I wasted my love and my time,
or am I just not trying hard enough to climb.
To climb into your heart, and make me feel you
within your soul. That seems to be my ultimate goal.
I know I can't make you love me,
but I care so much that that's all I want it to be.
I just want to get into your heart,
but it seems as if I'm just pulling myself apart.
Why can't you understand that you're my all consuming fire,
and that you fill my soul with nothing but desire.
I know you care, but not the way I do.
As soon as I met you, the sparks for me just flew.
It seems almost as if you don't really care,
and pointless is all those times we've shared.
I think all I can do now is just give up,
because I don't think I'm getting anywhere with my luck.
I loved you so much, but you never seemed to be touched.
So I guess it's time for me to go, go along with my hurt soul.
I'll always care, and I'll always be there.
Just know that all this love I had for you,
was everything that I felt......and true!
| On May 27th 2008 crzy4gd Said : | |
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that is a really great poem....keep up the good work . and return the fav. rate and read mine! |
| On November 30th 2007 KibaFanatic Said : | |
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all though I can't relate, you managed to make me feel for you. I can tell excactly what you're saying and fully understand the situation. Good job. |
| On November 20th 2007 KenaNicole Said : | |
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U sound JUST like me...i relate to this COMPLETELY! great job! |
| On July 12th 2007 AstralLoser Said : | |
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Wow great poem. Has a very good flow, and lots of people can relate to this. Good job =) |
| On June 8th 2007 eyynukka Said : | |
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wow..im just fuckin speechless. |
| On June 6th 2007 BillieJo88 Said : | |
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wow...that's amazing...i honestly can relate to this poem...it seems like you try and try to just prove your love to him and no matter what you do nothing seems to be enough. and everytime you try to get close...5 minutes later you seem even further away...you try to break through...but he doesn't feel that way about you. |
| On June 2nd 2007 rachelpowers Said : | |
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FUCK THOSE PPL THAT SAY IT ISNT GOOD!!! I LIKE IT ALOT & IT DESCRIBES MY LIFE SO MUCH....BUT DONT GIVE UP THINGS GOTTA GET WORSE B4 THEY GET BETTER!!! KEEP UR HEAD UP & THINGS WILL GET BETTER SOON! |
| On May 20th 2007 13579Vee Said : | |
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Thats so real ive totalyy been there |
| On April 26th 2007 sunny102 Said : | |
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Love and pain...so much a part of our lives. It's so hard when you love someone who doesn't return those feelings...Nice job and sorry for your pain:) |
| On April 17th 2007 marco635743548 Said : | |
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I could honestly say that i feel exactly the same way. Although she says "i love you" back it doesn't seem that she actually means it like i do. |
| On April 17th 2007 kcmsCynthia Said : | |
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Good Job,,Its Totally CUTE! |
| On April 15th 2007 damesecho Said : | |
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this is an excellent poem because so many can relate to the emotions you have expressed so clearly in it. Those who are fortunate (or unfortunate deepending on how you look at it) enough to never have felt this type of hurt will at some point in their lives experience it. |
| On April 14th 2007 LostAndLoved Said : | |
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omg i love tis its wow it really make u think can u plese check out some of mine plese |
| On April 14th 2007 lululollies Said : | |
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OMG.
sehr gut :D
very very good.
i hope he loves you back :D |
| On April 14th 2007 mozartist Said : | |
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nice dude, good job. |


