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A marriage almost destroyed by alcohol.

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Broken Bottle

Views (4430) Love Created on 4-9-07 Flag

   When the glass had broken through the night, he found it hard to keep up the fight. So he bowed his head and said a prayer, and found that his life should no longer be there. She touched his hand and said "Please don't cry", he never doubted that he was living a lie. She told him she loved him with all of her heart, and if he ever left her she would just fall apart. He never realized that she had cared so much, until that night when he finally felt her touch. She always felt that she shouldn't give up, and then she found that broken cup,. She knew what would happen if she didn't tell him, how much she cared for his every limb. So she made a decision to save his life, she made that choice, after all, she's his wife. A marriage that had fallen 2 years before, was beginning to mend itself to be broken no more. She had broken the bottle to eliminate his pain, and reached out to him to help keep him sane. She saved his life buy touching his hand then his heart, and the only words she uttered then were, "till death do us part".

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On June 23rd 2008 estidszeremet Said :
estidszeremet Beautiful poem...so meaningful
On May 6th 2008 danicholson Said :
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wow! that poem hit a MAJOR spot! my marriage was broken bc of a alcohol and i still have the pain! it is truly amazing!!!
On April 3rd 2008 babydog1993 Said :
babydog1993 very good
On January 9th 2008 br0wneyedbabee Said :
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my mom and my step father is just like this my mom deals with an alcoholic everyday it is sicking just thinking if one day he is going to be dead.. its hard and you did awesome venting in that way.. i wish i could too
On December 27th 2007 InvisibleFlame Said :
InvisibleFlame This should be rated higher...
On November 14th 2007 HahahhaJoe Said :
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best poem on here and lucas can burn in hell with his cold ass heart u motha fucker
On November 14th 2007 HahahhaJoe Said :
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best poem on here and lucas can burn in hell with his cold ass heart u motha fucker
On November 10th 2007 HeartBroken51 Said :
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This the best... just like my mother and fathers marragie
On September 29th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said :
xxlostsoul14xx aww i like it
On September 15th 2007 becritchie Said :
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WHEN U R READING THIS DONT STOP OR SOMETHING BAD WILL HAPPEN MY NAME IS SUMMER I AM 15 YEARS OLD i have BLONDE HAIR , SCARS no NOSE OR EARS I AM DEAD IF U DONT COPY THIS JUS LIKE FROM THE RING COPY N POST THIS ON 5 MORE SITES OR I WILL APPEAR ONE CREEPY NIGHT WEN UR NOT ExPECTING IT BY YOUR BED WITH A NIFE AND KILL U THIS IS NO JOKE SUMMET ING GOOD WILL HAPPEN TO U IF YOU POST THIS ON 5 MORE FLASH BOXES
On August 25th 2007 babyang04 Said :
babyang04 great job.. i loved it
On August 15th 2007 karaz85 Said :
karaz85 now that is a poem with some meaning!
On August 14th 2007 typhanie89 Said :
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I really loved this poem. my exhusband used to drink to much when we were together but now that I left him. He stopped drinking so much
On July 24th 2007 amshaye Said :
amshaye thats really good and heartfelt
On July 22nd 2007 2395 Said :
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♥Great Poem I Found It Truley Amazing♥