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Happiness, Her Disguise
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Created on 11-16-06
| Everyone saw her, she was smiling, but no one knew that on the inside she was dying. She couldn't continue to leave her life that way, she couldn't withstand another day. Constantly being pressured caused her to cry, wishing her life would end, wishing she could die. More and More pressure built up everyday, alive she no longer wanted to stay. So, what did she do? She ended her life, skin cold and blue. Authors Note : Yes, I've used that ending on another poem.. 'Skin Cold and Blue' |
Please Login to post comments| On July 8th 2007 NickCamp Said : | |
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Favorite one right here =] |
| On May 10th 2007 CLP64 Said : | |
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nice poem |
| On May 1st 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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False pretenses. I love this poem! thumbs up |
| On December 30th 2006 kywill Said : | |
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dark....but good. |
