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Love
I used to think
That love was grand.
But washed away quickly,
Like castles in the sand.
I used to think
That love was just.
That every man does
And every woman must.
I used to think,
That love was blind.
That special person
You try to find.
I used to think
That love was great.
Interwoven,
Into our fate.
I used to think
That loves doesn't lie.
An obvious feeling,
That doesn't imply
But sometimes I think,
That love is sour.
A force over which,
We have no power.
I sometimes think,
That love is a foe.
You need only look at Juliet
And poor Romeo.
I sometimes think,
That love is cruel.
Teasing like a maiden,
But kicking like a mule.
I sometimes think,
That love is taunting.
Unreachable,
Yet always flaunting.
I sometimes think,
That love is pain.
A farce we follow,
With such disdain
But now I know,
That love is all.
A trip, a stumble
And then a fall.
Now I know,
That love is best.
With a quickened beating,
Within the chest.
Now I know,
What love does hold.
The answer to a riddle,
We have not been told.
Now I know,
That love is rife.
With problems and heartbreak,
And trouble and strife.
Now I know,
That love is distance.
A journey to complete,
at any instance.
Now I know.
| On December 1st 2008 swimjim22 Said: |
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| Good job!!! I agree! And I,too, am a virgo like you are (: |
| On July 12th 2007 mazblondie Said: |
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| loved this, good style of writing!! |
| On May 21st 2007 becca0948 Said: |
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| wow hun, this is really good...i like your writing as well...i can relate i like this, tell me when you have more! :]] |
| On May 21st 2007 LMHrock Said: |
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| haha,
yeah this one is good too, i like it
u really have the construction of a poem down, it's crazy , and u make the words fit it really well, props. |
| On May 17th 2007 amptone Said: |
| On April 6th 2007 dureall Said: |
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| She's a little strong on the language...but I gree with her. |
| On April 6th 2007 knowlyfe Said: |
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| Holy fuck...thats REALLY good, you got some skill! |


