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Created: 04/03 2007
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Category: Love

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Love

I used to think
That love was grand.
But washed away quickly,
Like castles in the sand.

I used to think
That love was just.
That every man does
And every woman must.

I used to think,
That love was blind.
That special person
You try to find.

I used to think
That love was great.
Interwoven,
Into our fate.

I used to think
That loves doesn't lie.
An obvious feeling,
That doesn't imply

But sometimes I think,
That love is sour.
A force over which,
We have no power.

I sometimes think,
That love is a foe.
You need only look at Juliet
And poor Romeo.

I sometimes think,
That love is cruel.
Teasing like a maiden,
But kicking like a mule.

I sometimes think,
That love is taunting.
Unreachable,
Yet always flaunting.

I sometimes think,
That love is pain.
A farce we follow,
With such disdain

But now I know,
That love is all.
A trip, a stumble
And then a fall.

Now I know,
That love is best.
With a quickened beating,
Within the chest.

Now I know,
What love does hold.
The answer to a riddle,
We have not been told.

Now I know,
That love is rife.
With problems and heartbreak,
And trouble and strife.

Now I know,
That love is distance.
A journey to complete,
at any instance.

Now I know.

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On December 1st 2008 swimjim22 Said: 
swimjim22 Good job!!! I agree! And I,too, am a virgo like you are (:
On July 12th 2007 mazblondie Said: 
mazblondie loved this, good style of writing!!
On May 21st 2007 becca0948 Said: 
becca0948 wow hun, this is really good...i like your writing as well...i can relate i like this, tell me when you have more! :]]
On May 21st 2007 LMHrock Said: 
LMHrock haha, yeah this one is good too, i like it u really have the construction of a poem down, it's crazy , and u make the words fit it really well, props.
On May 17th 2007 amptone Said: 
amptone Yeah you already know my foul mouth so I'll spare you the cursing. That is great. I have felt the same way and I am never good at expressing feelings. I don't talk about feelings much! But you summed it up for me. PROPS!!!!
On April 6th 2007 dureall Said: 
dureall She's a little strong on the language...but I gree with her.
On April 6th 2007 knowlyfe Said: 
knowlyfe Holy fuck...thats REALLY good, you got some skill!