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Created: 11/10 2006
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Category: Pain

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When Hearts are Broken

When Hearts are Broken

When hearts are broken and dreams are destroyed
And theres no one left there to fill the void
Long gone was once that feeling of hapiness
And your light that was once your heart becomes darkness
I sit I pretend nothing is wrong
But everything is released simply by a song
It tells of the days and memories you cared
And the hopes and dreams we had once shared
My tears at first were sad and ended at a date
from then on were just thoughts of hate
I cursed the day I unlocked my door
And in a rush of panick I hit the floor
As I lay there thinking of how things went so wrong
I speak into my darkness and tell myself to be strong
My stance is weak but I stand up tall
And its to you regrettingly I place a call
I thought you would be kind
but those words I would not find
Instead I am nothing and you burn & scold
And its me you no longer want to hold
Youve given me so many lies and deciete
And my love is now something you would conquer and defeat
I dont know if this is something you wanted all along
But now my heart is broken and feels nothing to our song

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On December 20th 2006 sincerelyichab Said: 
sincerelyichab Oh wow, very nice...I especially like the opening part because when time and devotion to a certain "person" just flops out...there's just a void, and it takes awhile before it can smooth out..very well put, I like the end, referring back to that song of "yours"...very good...when are you going to put more stuff up...I'm eager lol