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the bitch
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Created on 7-9-07
i do the dishes
and the clothes too
i even pick up in the living room
while you do nothing
i cook your food
and clean the mess you make too
but guess what you do?
absolutely nothing!
you come home from work
after buying your liquior
then get drunk and fall asleep
still doing nothing
you've ruined my life
for what you call "enjoyment"
im tired of it
just as much as the others
i cant stand you anymore
i hate what you've become
so you know what mom?
go rot in hell!
Please Login to post comments| On July 15th 2007 Jarrettsdance Said : | |
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woa, i can feel the anger so well! |
| On July 11th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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i like it, good job |
| On July 11th 2007 7unicornrings Said : | |
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wow!! harsh but i guess that bitch deserves it!! me likely xD |
| On July 10th 2007 krista32890 Said : | |
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You tell that Bitch! A little blunt, but maybe that's a good thing, a little unique. I say be more creavtive in your descriptions. But what the fuck should I know! I don't write poems, haha |
