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Created on 10-14-07
I'm fine says she, do you believe
what she says is true, I'm sure
I can't believe she wants
to leave this all behind, good
bad, ugly and the rest
whatever, meh, blah ... mmmm
speak before you want to scream
Please Login to post comments| On February 4th 2008 Bumpkingurl Said : | |
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You were quite close, well done :) A girl was leaving a situation she found rough and said she was fine. I didn't believe her. She acted nonchalant even when I knew she was hurting... it's hard to help when people push you away (though I can't talk considering I've been 'guilty' of the same thing). Thanks for commenting :) B-g |
| On November 6th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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i think i understand.. someone is leaving a situation they find rough and the other person is trying to act nonchalant like it's not phasing them? how close am i? |
| On October 16th 2007 robespierre96 Said : | |
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it's not confusticated at all!i likes it!!!!to your comments....frequently!!!yep!! |
| On October 16th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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Cool, it did the job for me too...lol. |
| On October 15th 2007 Bumpkingurl Said : | |
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That's kinda of the idea.. :P At least it's effective. |
| On October 15th 2007 ESCAPEDFROMGOD Said : | |
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I read it about five times and I'm still confused. |
| On October 14th 2007 SexySan88 Said : | |
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Nice job! |
