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Created:
01/10 2008
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Category:
Pain
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The way i feel for him... |
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AARON |
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AARON!!!! |
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POEM!
How can i make him See!
Feel!
Think!
I love him soo much, I think of him without rest.
Hes like my bestfriend. mostly all that ive ever wanted.
And to him! Im like the one he sees rite past. :(
The one he doesnt notice. The one he ignores.
If only i can make him see.
How much i will give him wat he really is searching for.
Someone to love him, cherish him, give him all hes ever wanted b4.
Im tired of being invisible. His words with that long for some1, hurt me
More and more. Bcuz i know im definitely the one.
Only again he looks rite past me.
I want him to look inside me.
I want him to look into my eyes.
I want to touch his soul and carress his lips.
I want to hold him and tell him it will all be okay.
If only i can make him see......
| On January 26th 2009 elvira2196 Said: |
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| Awww the ending is very cute. Great Job w/ expressing emotions that a person would go thru in a situation such as this one. |
| On January 26th 2009 erickagere Said: |
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| Ahh love. I still haven't found it yet. But that's sad. He just look right to you and not past you. |
| On January 16th 2008 mackenzie3893 Said: |
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| i love this poem.
very expressive.
very interesting. |
| On January 13th 2008 NisaNicole Said: |
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| Very deep! I'm sure this feeling sucks. Very well written, Love it. Any guy that makes you feel unworthy isn't worth your precious time. |
| On January 11th 2008 emily28793 Said: |
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| aww that is sad..... i hope he sees u one day!! |
| On January 11th 2008 Deshay116 Said: |
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| i love this poem very true on a scale 1-10 this would be a perfect 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!! go GIrl |
| On January 10th 2008 BuNnYoo7 Said: |
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| love. is something u cant take advantage of. im talking to the one i love rite now. and still hes making me feel like im not worthy for him :'( |


