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You've gone to heaven but you're here

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Created: 01/18 2007
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Category: Anger

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White patent rose

   ¢Ó...White Patent Rose...¢Ó               

it was what made the soft white rose petals unfold with the dreamlike laughter,


minous smile and his golden hair gleaming like the sunrise,


White silk and satin dancing in the wind


The sun sets and those memories and fantasies fade.


The sweet melodic music dies away as it trills into the distance.


A crystal tear rolls down my face.


The soft shimmering drops of sunlight become hard hateful drops of cold wet rain,


And that is all you can hear now,


The rhythm of the glassy droplets on the dark cold ground dampen my mind with thought of you


My eyes weary, half closed they stare blankly


The glow that once lit my blue eyes, died and left them cold and gray.


I raise my head and look into the sheets of rain,


The stormy sky clouds the horizon.


The white roses become limp as I throw the last of the beautiful flowers at the foot of his
weathered stone cross.


I shove my clammy hands into the warm wool pockets of my soaked drench coat.


I lower my head, raindrops dripping from my tattered brim.


Slowly I walk away


The small pools splash at my feet as the memories burn ... then fade.

 

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On February 24th 2007 Bigheadmark89 Said: 
Bigheadmark89 wow, dude that actually made me cry...don't tell anyone. you're awesome.
On January 22nd 2007 oppsydaisy Said: 
oppsydaisy i LOVE this one... yeah it's sad, but what really makes it great is the amazing description
On January 20th 2007 drowningnlove Said: 
drowningnlove *sniff* sad.