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you are my drug
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Created on 1-1-07
When you come around, with your baby blue eyes and you powt your lower lip you make me flip, when you kiss me, when you hug me , you're like a drug, I need more of you I want more of you but I know you bad for me cause all you will do is hurt me, I see, when you flirt with other guys, in school you act all that and treat me like crap, I guess you can, cause you know I'm addicted to you
You flirt and you cheat, you come and you leave you treat me like a piece of meat. When you sad I'm there to cheer you up, when you mad I'm your punching bag, when you cry, I wipe every tear, but when you fine, you don't even care about me, how you ripping out my heart when I see you with other guys you say you sorry and you never do it again and you gain my trust but I know you will, in the end you only
make me ill, cause you my drug
So stop playing those games with my heart, cause when you leave but then come back it drives me crazy, when you cheat on me it makes me wanna cry, but when you come back to me it makes me wanna shout, Makes me wanna tell you NO, but I can't cause baby you my drug.
Please Login to post comments| On June 7th 2007 gigglehottie Said : | |
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wow.. nice work |
| On February 20th 2007 thatonegirl84 Said : | |
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I hope you feel better now |
| On February 11th 2007 BrokenFaceDown Said : | |
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i know how that goes. i feel the pain!! :) sorry you had to deal with that too. |
| On February 11th 2007 gotkarma Said : | |
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I like this one alot.
Look at some of mine? |
| On January 28th 2007 AlishaFoerster Said : | |
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i love that your a guy and you actually wrote something good.
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| On January 21st 2007 oppsydaisy Said : | |
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i like this one too!!! i wish they had a rehab for this kind of addiction cuz i NEED to get of the drug i'm on.. =/... GOOD WORK! |
| On January 21st 2007 JenMoe Said : | |
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Wow. I think that can be said about guys as much as girls. Trust me, no matter who you are, it sucks to have that done to you. Good work. |
| On January 14th 2007 Aoxomoxoa Said : | |
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very powerful. i'm impressed wtih your phonetic intensives and double entendre in the second paragraph. you should write more like this, it's almost a vignette story by it's formatting. i like it. |
| On January 11th 2007 1Estrellita1 Said : | |
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i liked it... |
| On January 10th 2007 HolyRoller15 Said : | |
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Wow..Nice poem!!! Keep doing what your doing cuz boy you got it going on!!!..lol...-HolyRoller |
| On January 2nd 2007 scodettedxt Said : | |
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very good:] |
| On January 2nd 2007 CollinsUrAmigo Said : | |
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oof... |
| On January 1st 2007 svnna06 Said : | |
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wow. thats umm wow |
| On January 1st 2007 shadeeblood Said : | |
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damm, she did you wrong! stay strong! theres other females out there who will be true to you! dont give up on love jus yet! she will soon realize what she has when you've moved on! keep ur head ^!!
** amanda aka Babigurl ** |
| On January 1st 2007 kraziegurl4eva Said : | |
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i love it. it is deep and really good! |
| On January 1st 2007 Samsonlygirl Said : | |
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I think more guys should write poetry. It's pretty good. You should go to a site called Teen poetry.com They have a lot of great poety that is all written by teens. My name is Bholmes on that site you should look up my poems. Keep writing! |
| On January 1st 2007 Rhyno187 Said : | |
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lol |
