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One wish

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If only we could all hav one wish,

but the question is, what would we wish for?

something so simple, that dosen't even matter

or something we desire that could change our lives

 

We all have dreams

that streches from our inner thoughts,

would this affect our choice

or just ponder in our minds

 

If i could have one wish

 i know what i would ask for

a new life, to begin a new

with someone to love me

 

What would you do?

having the chance to change something?

do you think your life is perfect?

would you take that wish?

 

 

Note: if you could have one wish, what would you wish for.

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On May 6th 2008 idontmakeusern Said :
idontmakeusern i like it & my wish would be 2 be loved
On April 29th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth Great work.
On April 29th 2008 dsouthernlily Said :
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not sure what I would wish for. Seem to look at life in the matter of one grows with the mistakes and trials their life brings and without them, they wouldn't be who they are or who they have become.
On April 22nd 2008 darkemokid1415 Said :
darkemokid1415 great poem, I would wish that I could start over. Have a new life in a new family w/ new friends being a totaly different person
On April 22nd 2008 darkemokid1415 Said :
darkemokid1415 great poem, I would wish that I could start over. Have a new life in a new family w/ new friends being a totaly different person
On April 22nd 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord love the poem! now what would i wish for? intelagence!
On April 22nd 2008 jwoody1980 Said :
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i like it i think we all wonder what we would wish for if we had one wish i would want a new beginging