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My Dark Reflection |
The road of life
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Created on 3-18-08
life is mearly just a dream
the winged road of destiny
a shadow in my mind
each step we take
new things we see
a different choice beckoning around the bend
our path streched out
like an open road
not knowing were it's going to lead
fears and dangers
laughs and fun
these memories concealed in my heart
lovers found
and friendships lost
but we must never forget
the road were on
un-certain as it maybe
it holds the key to our destiny
Please Login to post comments| On March 20th 2008 2543 Said : | |
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i loved it
It spoke to me...
Beautiful job! |
| On March 19th 2008 idontmakeusern Said : | |
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it kl =D |
| On March 19th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Keep at it the crits are really honest, I agree with them and the poem is really good. i love it!! |
| On March 18th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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i agree with the first person, but it was good. it reminds me of Robert Frost. |
| On March 18th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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i liked it |
| On March 18th 2008 jwoody1980 Said : | |
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its ok some words seem out of place and makes it kind of confusing but not bad
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