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Created on 3-5-08
Why does the world treat her this way?
Anytime anything good comes along
you always seem to take it away,
spirling out of control
Fear and distruction reaches her limit
her pain builds up, but never shows
dispear seeps through her tears;
her life she can no longer control
Always shouting, always preeching,
this hole in her heart wanting to be filled,
screaming out, but never hearing a sound
their hate filled words have broken her sheild
She feels so small and tall they stand
their eyes stare down
the days alone, trying to heal
but the scars you made, the blood on the ground
No freedom, no light;
caged in to your collapsing dream,
thorns your weapon, digging into her flesh
they gang on her, her foe their team
Please Login to post comments| On March 19th 2008 idontmakeusern Said : | |
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(L) i can just imagine like glass streaming thru an invisable shield in "their hate filled words have broken her sheild" me likes a lot |
| On March 11th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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my fav line is "their hate filled words have broken her sheild" it sent a vivid pic of a girl standing holding onto her all, her shied and they simply shatter it out of spite and malice. really like this one!! |
| On March 7th 2008 2543 Said : | |
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that's my life too lol really good poem though |
| On March 5th 2008 ladytsundea Said : | |
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thats my life. |
| On March 5th 2008 ZD1990 Said : | |
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EMO. |
