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The show mustn't go on

Views (124) Tragedy Created on 2-27-08 Flag

Behind close doors

in a dark abysis,

lies her bottomless soul

and his long loss kiss.

The touch of his hand

throwing her away,

all she wanted  was him 

but hopelessly she lay.

All her long years

he never even cared,

up rose his fist

she trembled, she was scared.

Black and blue,

bruises like spots,

once his heart was pure

but now it's not.

Wrapped by hate

and not by love,

he'll rot in hell

and she'll shed no more blood.

The end is here

as with the gun,

she points and pulls the triger

and no longer his show gose on.

 

The last thing she says to him before he's gone forever is

 

"The greatest thing

you'll ever learn, 

is to be loved

and be loved in return." 

 

 

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On March 7th 2008 2543 Said :
2543 awesome
On March 3rd 2008 chipmunkgirl10 Said :
chipmunkgirl10 wow amazing! i love it, good way of putting this into words!
On March 1st 2008 darkmatters Said :
darkmatters i rather like this.
On March 1st 2008 idontmakeusern Said :
idontmakeusern kl (Y)
On February 29th 2008 fallenXx420 Said :
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ur a really good writer...this was just wow...yesturday this lady shot her husband and said he commited suicide..this is a huge reminder of that...i bet that is how she felt...ur really good keep writing!
On February 28th 2008 betyoucantgess Said :
betyoucantgess im gonna cry.
On February 28th 2008 mackenzie3893 Said :
mackenzie3893 Dude.U are a greeat writer. I loved it. Great use of words
On February 28th 2008 beautyisthewol Said :
beautyisthewol Wow, I like this a lot. You write so well. Could you check out my newest works, please??
On February 28th 2008 dsouthernlily Said :
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so sad but written awesomely... Flowed Great
On February 27th 2008 icewillow13 Said :
icewillow13 love it
On February 27th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Wow. Intense. Great work!
On February 27th 2008 Pooh455 Said :
Pooh455 oh my, oh my, i really love the last part about love and love in return. wonderful i wish i could give you ten votes lol
On February 27th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said :
tyiqoqibfiobao very good
On February 27th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 This is kinda sad... *thumbs up* It's really good though. Keep up the great work :)
On February 27th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord not too shabby at all!