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My Dark Reflection |
The show mustn't go on
Behind close doors
in a dark abysis,
lies her bottomless soul
and his long loss kiss.
The touch of his hand
throwing her away,
all she wanted was him
but hopelessly she lay.
All her long years
he never even cared,
up rose his fist
she trembled, she was scared.
Black and blue,
bruises like spots,
once his heart was pure
but now it's not.
Wrapped by hate
and not by love,
he'll rot in hell
and she'll shed no more blood.
The end is here
as with the gun,
she points and pulls the triger
and no longer his show gose on.
The last thing she says to him before he's gone forever is
"The greatest thing
you'll ever learn,
is to be loved
and be loved in return."
| On March 7th 2008 2543 Said : | |
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awesome |
| On March 3rd 2008 chipmunkgirl10 Said : | |
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wow amazing! i love it, good way of putting this into words! |
| On March 1st 2008 darkmatters Said : | |
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i rather like this. |
| On March 1st 2008 idontmakeusern Said : | |
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| On February 29th 2008 fallenXx420 Said : | |
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ur a really good writer...this was just wow...yesturday this lady shot her husband and said he commited suicide..this is a huge reminder of that...i bet that is how she felt...ur really good keep writing! |
| On February 28th 2008 betyoucantgess Said : | |
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im gonna cry. |
| On February 28th 2008 mackenzie3893 Said : | |
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Dude.U are a greeat writer.
I loved it.
Great use of words |
| On February 28th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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Wow, I like this a lot. You write so well. Could you check out my newest works, please?? |
| On February 28th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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so sad but written awesomely... Flowed Great |
| On February 27th 2008 icewillow13 Said : | |
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love it |
| On February 27th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Wow. Intense. Great work! |
| On February 27th 2008 Pooh455 Said : | |
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oh my, oh my, i really love the last part about love and love in return. wonderful i wish i could give you ten votes lol |
| On February 27th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
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very good |
| On February 27th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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This is kinda sad... *thumbs up* It's really good though. Keep up the great work :) |
| On February 27th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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not too shabby at all! |


